Question

【题目】书面表达(共l0分)。

健康对于每一个人来说都是很重要的 (very important)。下面是 “保持健康的方法”的几条好建议。请你跟具下表的内容提示，以“The way to keep healthy ”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。

三要：1.要多吃水果和蔬菜，多喝开水（fruit, vegetables , warm water）

2.要多运动 （do exercise）

3.晚上早睡 （go to bed early）

三不要：

1.不要抽烟，喝酒（smoke ,drink ）

2.不要吃太多的糖 ( sugar )

3.工作或学习不要太劳累 (too tired)

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Answer 1

【答案】

The way to Keep Healthy

Health is very important for everybody.Then what can we do to keep healthy? You can try the following tips:

First,you should have healthy eating habits.You should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much candies. It’s bad for you.

Second,you can do exercises.Sports can make you stronger and healthier.You can play baketball with your friends when you are free.You can go to the mouuntains with your family.

Third,You should go to bed early.It’s good for your health.

Stay away from smoking and drinking. Smoking and drinking are too bad for men .They can cause terrible illness.

At last,you don’t work or study for long time.You will be tired.It is bad for your health.

If you do these things ,I believe you can be a healthy man.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文给出了写作的提纲，在写作时要构思好文章的结构，注意要点一定齐全。句子要完整，表达准确，注意时态的变化和主谓一致。文中可适当使用一些连接词来加强文章的逻辑性。

写作亮点：这篇作文结构清晰完整，表达准确流利，要点齐全。文中有一些好的表达方式如First,you should have healthy eating habits.You should eat more vegetables and fruit. Don’t eat too much candies. Stay away from smoking and drinking. Smoking and drinking are too bad for men .They can cause terrible illness.等等。