Question

【题目】请根据所给内容的提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。

1. Daniel是一名学生，也是学生会的主席。 2. 他学习认真，成绩优异，乐于助人。

3. 他最喜欢的颜色是蓝色，因为蓝色代表着宁静，蓝色对大脑和身体都有好处。

4. 当别人生气时，Daniel常帮助他们平静下来。

5. 他热爱和平，希望世界上没有战争，我们的世界永远和平。

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Answer 1

【答案】 Daniel is a student and he’s also the chairperson of the Students’ Union. He studies very hard and gets very good results. He is willing to help others. His favourite color is blue because blue represents calm and it is good for mind and body.

When someone gets angry, Daniel usually helps him calm down. Daniel loves peace and he hopes there is no war in the world and our world is always peaceful.

【解析】试题分析：本篇习作成功地完成了写作任务，表达顺畅，结构连贯，字数符合要求。准确运用时态，要点全面，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，适当发挥了想象。短语的使用使得文章很生动，例如is good for mind and body.，helps him calm down，be always peaceful等。而多种句式的运用则是本文的亮点，例如，he’s also the chairperson of the Students’Union.，He studies very hard and gets very good results.，He is willing to help others.，When someone gets angry, Daniel usually helps him calm down.。然，这是一篇非常优秀的习作。