题目内容
【题目】书面表达
初中生即将结束,学校英语俱乐部特邀你写一篇英语短文,给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议。 内容要点如下:1.初中科目更多,好的学习方法很重要;2.锻炼身体,保持健康;3.参加社团活动,使学校生活丰富;4.多读书,多交朋友;5.补充一两点个人想法。
注意:1.短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
2.不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名。
3.语句连贯,词数80词左右。
参考词汇:method n.方法 club. n 社团 colorful adj.丰富的
Welcome to our school!
【答案】Welcome to our school!
I will graduate from my school. Therefore I’d like to share something with you. Firstly,because of many subjects in middle school, it is important for you to have your own study methods. In order to be better at study, you must do more exercise to keep healthy. Secondly, you can join in some club activities to make school life more colorful in your spare time. In other words, please keep balance between school life and study. In addition, it is a good choice to make more friends and read more books. At last, if you have problems in school life, please talk with your teachers or parents. They are always there waiting for you. I hope you will have a wonderful school life.
【解析】本文是一篇给材料作文。要求是给七年级新生的学习生活提几点建议,所以人称主要用第二人称,时态用一般现在时。在写作过程中,首先要将所提供给的信息要点用英语正确的表达出来,要涵盖所提到的所有要点,同时注意理顺要点,防止漏写,可适当发挥。同时在写作的时候,注意紧扣主题,连句成篇,保持文章的连贯性。要注意准确运用时态,语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯;尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,最好不要写太长的复合句;尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词,确保正确率;词汇、句式要丰富多样,可以为文章增色添彩。最后检查所用时态、人称是否符合要求;检查段落是否完整,句子表达是否准确,语法、拼写、标点、移行、大小写等方面是否有误等。