Question

书面表达（共15分）

下面是一份关于大家对90后看法的调查表，请根据表格内容，写一篇短文，80字左右。开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

正面观点	反面观点
90后活泼，精力充沛	90后不够冷静，有点冲动
90后兴趣广泛，有创造力	90后过分依赖网络
90后待人真诚，朋友多	90后注重穿着而忽视了学习
大家都希望90后能够严格要求自己，努力学习知识，并期待他们有一个更美好的未来。

 

What are the children born in the 1990s like? Here is a survey.

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Answer 1

What are the children born in the 1990s like? Here is a survey. Some people think those children are lively and energetic. They have wide interest and they are creative. Besides, they are kind to people and have many friends. But other people have different opinions. They think those children are not calm enough. They rely much on Internet. Also, they pay more attention to appearance, but pay little attention to their studies.

Everyone hope those children can study harder and get more knowledge. They wish them to have a better future.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们根据表格中的一项调查结果，来说一说人们对90后的看法。通过阅读表格可知，大家对90后的看法可以分为两个方面，一个是正面的观点，认为他们积极、活泼，爱好广泛，朋友多；另一个是反面的观点，觉得他们冲动，不爱学习，注重外表等。最后是人们对90后孩子们的一个期望。我们需要将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。因为内容较多，我们在写作时需要注意表达的层次。我们可以将这篇作文分成两段或三段来写，第一段写正面的观点，第二段写反面的观点，最后是人们对90后孩子们的希望。或者将正面和反面的观点归为一段，分成两段来写。写作时，要注意表达的流畅，多使用好的短语和句型，增强文章的表现力。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较优秀的作文，作者按照题目的要求将这个调查结果给我们详细的叙述了出来。整篇短文作者是分成两段来写的，第一段是两种不同的观点，正面的和反面的；第二段是大家对他们的期望。这样分段来写使得文章层次清楚，结构清晰。另外短文中作者还使用了较好的句型，如Besides, they are kind to people and have many friends.、They rely much on Internet.、 Also, they pay more attention to appearance, but pay little attention to their studies. 、They wish them to have a better future.等。作者用到了短语besides, also,…enough,并列句等。

考点：提纲类作文。