Question

1．在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以Proud of My School 请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿．内容包括学校面貌，你在校的活动，以及你喜欢学校的原因．
提示词：big\small，trees，play games，family，be kind to，be\feel proud of．
My school is very big．There are several tall buildings in it．There are more than 2000 students in my school．We have a big playground with lots of trees around it．There are a lot of flowers everywhere．
We have a lot of fun at school every day．After class we play games and do lots of sports，such as playing basketball，football，tennis and so on．We work very hard and do very well in our lessons．
I love my school because it's like a big family．The teachers in my school are very kind to us．I am proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容以Proud of My School说说你的学校．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称和第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1学校面貌
2你在校的活动
3你喜欢学校的原因
常用到的重点短语：
there be有
such as 例如
and so on等等
do well in擅长
be kind to sb对某人友好
be proud of 以…为自豪
【高分句型】
1．We have a big playground with lots of trees around it．
with lots of trees around it独立主格做定语
2．I ①am proud of my school ②because it is③one of the best schools in my heart．
①be proud of 以…为自豪
②because引导原因状语从句．
③one+of+the+最高级+名词复数，最怎样的…之一．

解答 My school is very big．There are several tall buildings in it．There are more than 2000 students in my school．We have a big playground with lots of trees around it．【高分句型】There are a lot of flowers everywhere．（学校面貌）
We have a lot of fun at school every day．After class we play games and do lots of sports，such as  playing basketball，football，tennis and so on．We work very hard and do very well in our lessons．（在校的活动）
I love my school because it's like a big family．The teachers in my school are very kind to us．I am proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart．【高分句型】（喜欢学校的原因）

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯