Question

【题目】书面表达

71．根据下列提示，请你写一篇日记，记录五月一日(星期五)你和Lily一起去参观杭州博物馆的事。

提示：(1)天气：晴朗；(2)距离：博物馆离家两公里；(3)交通工具：决定骑自行车去；(4)时间：八点出发，下午三点回家；(5)内容：见到了许多照片、事物等，学到许多。也见到了许多父母和孩子、学生和老师、士兵等。

注意：文章要符合日记的格式，可根据内容适当发挥。词数：60左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】May 1st, Friday Sunny

It was fine today. Lily and I went to visit Hangzhou Museum. It is about 2 kilometers away from my home. So we decided to go there by bike. We started at 8 o'clock. At the museum we saw many photos and other things. We learned a lot. There we saw a lot of children with their parents, students with their teachers and soldiers. At three o'clock in the afternoon we left the museum for home. We had a good time today.

【解析】本文内容应包含提示中所提供的所有信息。这是一篇日记，应采用一般过去时，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确，简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。