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【题目】书面表达。

通过在班级内进行调查,我们发现很多同学在生活和饮食方面都存在一些影响健康的习惯,请你根据下面提示以Form a Good Living Habit为题写一篇短文。

现象:一些同学不吃早饭,课间吃一些零食(snacks)充饥;不喜欢吃蔬菜而喜欢吃一些高热量的食物,平常也缺乏锻炼。

结果:有些同学体重开始增加,不时出现一些健康问题。

建议:要养成有规律的生活习惯,按时吃早饭,多吃些健康食品,并加强锻炼。

说明:1、文章开头已给出,不记入总词数。2、120字左右。

【答案】

Form a Good Living Habit

Through the survey we find that many students have some bad habits in life and diet. For example, some students don’t eat breakfast . When they feel hungry, they eat some snacks between classes. And also some others don’t like to eat vegetables but enjoy eating the kind of food rich in calories. What’s worse they did not do enough exercise. As a result many of them begin to gain weight and often have some health problems.

In order to keep healthy, therefore, we should realize the importance of healthy diet and try to develop good living habits. It will benefit us to eat breakfast on time and have more healthy food. Besides, we should also take more exercise.

【解析】

试题分析:本篇作文材料是关于习惯的,内容贴近学生实际生活,属于话题作文。 对既定的话题进行讨论,学生有一定的自由发挥空间,可以畅所欲言,各抒己见。就本篇作文而言,内容涉及了三方面,即学生中存在的一些不良现象、由此导致的健康问题和给人们提出的建议。在写作时要注意合理安排内容,在遣词造句上,应多使用一些高级词汇和高级句型,如定语从句、倒装结构、非谓语动词和强调句型等,恰当地穿插一些过渡性词语,比如on the other hand、besides、as a result等,这样会使文章自然、流畅,有较强的逻辑性。

写作亮点:本篇范文不仅语言清晰流畅,简洁自然,而且要点全面。文章开门见山提出话题,然后用for example、some、others、what’s worse和as a result等词语列举出学生们中间所存在的一些不良现象和导致的健康问题。此外,作者还用不定式短语in order to和副词therefore, besides等引出作者所提的建议,这些连接词的使用不仅很好的起到了承上启下的作用,而且使文章上下衔接自然,结构清晰,层次分明。文中出现的大量短语rich in、gain weight、develop good living habits.和take more exercise.反映出作者词汇的丰富,也使文章更加简洁明了,清晰易懂。

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Let me tell you about my hometown. I live in Kinsale. It may be one of the smallest towns in Southern Ireland, but it is also the most famous one.

The fish restaurants are very wonderful and there are many good cooks here. They cook the best fish for the visitors. The food is expensive but people enjoy it very much. So you can see many people from different countries in every restaurant.

My town is very beautiful because it is by the sea. In summer it is very cool and you can go swimming in the sea. There are three small shops and you can buy your friends many souvenirs there. They are very cheap and you can pay a little money for them.

The people in my town are friendly. They can make friends with you. If you feel ill, there is a clinic (诊所)with a doctor and a nurse. I’m Andy. You can ask me for help when you have some trouble(困难,麻烦). I think you will enjoy the holiday.

A brief introduction(介绍) about the town

The hometown is __【1】___ Kinsale.

Perhaps ,it is one of the smallest towns in 【2】 Ireland.

The town is __【3】_ the sea.

Things to do

There are many __【4】___ fish restaurants.

People can go __【5】___ in the sea in summer.

And you can also buy a lot of souvenirs _【6】____ your friends, because the souvenirs are not 【7】____ .

People there

People who live in the town are very __【8】____. They would like to _【9】____ friends with you.

If you are in trouble, you can go to Andy for_【10】____ you .

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