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【题目】作文

假如Tom是一位来自美国的外教老师，你从以下几个方面介绍五年前和现在的一些情况，要求学生们写一篇介绍他的短文1：外貌:五年前他很胖，留卷发。现在他很瘦，短直发。2性格：他以前很安静。现在，他很活跃和幽默。3爱好： 以前他喜欢听音乐，现在他经常旅游。4生活方式 ：以前他总在外面吃快餐，现在他经常亲自在家做饭。

Tom is my foreign English teacher. He comes from America. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Tom is my foreign English teacher. He comes from America. He has changed a lot in the past five years.

Five years ago, he was heavy and had curly hair. But now he is thin and has short straight hair. As for his personality, he used to be quiet and did not like talking. However, he is active and humorous now. He often makes us laugh in class. Tom used to listen to music, but now he spends much of his free time travelling all over the world. He says it is exciting. In the past, he often ate fast food. Now, he loves to cook at home on his own. He thinks it is good for his health.

【解析】

时态：一般现在时与过去时相结合

重点词汇：curly卷的；straight直的；active活跃的；humorous幽默的；travel旅游；

重点短语及搭配：in the past five years在过去五年里；like doing sth喜欢做某事；make sb do sth让某人做某事；used to do过去常常做某事；listen to music听音乐；fast food快餐；be good for对……有好处；

亮点句型：（1）He has changed a lot in the past five years. 在过去的五年里，他改变了很多。这里运用现在完成时（has/have+done）,表示动作从过去一直持续到现在，可能将会持续到将来。（2）Tom used to listen to music, but now he spends much of his free time travelling all over the world. 汤姆过去常听音乐，但现在他的大部分空闲时间都在环游世界。Sb spend time (in)doing sth,某人花费时间做某事。