Question

11．你喜欢阅读吗？阅读能使人明智，使人充实． 请你以"Reading is Very Important"为题，写一篇有关阅读的短文
要点：1．阅读的益处：
2．你的阅读习惯（喜欢的书籍，阅读的时间，地点，购书方式等）
3．你的阅读体会．
4．号召大家多阅读．
提示：1．短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名．
2．短文中应包含至少3个要点．
3．书写工整，语句通顺，连贯，词数不少于80．
注意：文章开头已给出，比计入总词数．
Reading is Very Important
Reading can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge．
I like reading a lot．In my spare time，I often read newspapers and magazines，from which I can get lots of fun and learn about what's going on around the world．I also read my favorite books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relax and happy．On weekends I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library．Andl I often read for about half an hour before going to bed．Now I usually buy my favorite books on line．
Summer vocalion is coming．I plan to read more English books to improve my English abilities I often share my favorite books with my friends and classmates．It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's very important and necessary for us．Let's do more reading together．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"Reading is Very Importatn"为题，写一篇有关阅读的短文．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．阅读的益处：
2．你的阅读习惯（喜欢的书籍，阅读的时间，地点，购书方式等）
3．你的阅读体会．
4．号召大家多阅读
常用到的重点短语：
around the world 全世界
and so on  等等
make sb+adj  让某人怎样
spend+时间+doing sth 花时间做某事
share sth with sb 和某人分享某某
【高分句型】
1．I also read my favorite books ①such as story books，novels and so on，②which make me relax and happy．
①such as 例如，and so on  等等
②which作为关系词的定语从句，which做主语，修饰先行词favorite books．
2．And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed．
before going to bed是省略句，完整表达是before I go to bed．
3．①It's time for us to form a good reading habit②because it's very important and necessary for us．
①It's time for sb to do sth 某人做某事的时间到了
②because 引导的原因状语从句

解答 Reading is Very Important
Reading can not only open up our eyes but also improve our knowledge．（阅读的益处）
I like reading a lot．In my spare time，I often read newspapers and magazines，from which I can get lots of fun and learn about what's going on around the world．I also read my favorite books such as story books，novels and so on，which make me relax and happy．【高分句型】On weekends I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library．And I often read for about half an hour before going to bed．【高分句型】Now I usually buy my favorite books on line．（阅读习惯，阅读体会）
Summer vocalion is coming．I plan to read more English books to improve my English abilities I often share my favorite books with my friends and classmates．It's time for us to form a good reading habit because it's very important and necessary for us．【高分句型】Let's do more reading together．（号召大家多阅读）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第一人称，写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．