题目内容
4.根据中文和英文提示,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信.信的开头和结尾已给出,其词数不计入所要完成的回信内.所给英文提示词语仅供选用.请不要写出你的校名和姓名.俗话说"予人玫瑰,手留余香".日常生活中我们会遇到各种困难,因此,我们会需要他人的帮助,但同时,我们也要学会帮助他人.假如你叫王芳,最近正在和美国笔友Ann通过邮件谈论"帮助"的话题,她想了解在日常生活中你是怎样帮助他/她人的.请你根据她的问题回复邮件.
提示词语:like,unhappy,smile,improve
1、Who did you help?What happened to him/her?
2、How did you help him/her?
3、What do you think of it?
Dear Ann,
Nice to hear from you.
.
Yours,
Wang Fang.
分析 高分句型分析
高分句型一:
①From then on,②whenever she had problems,she would ask me,and I ③was patient to explain them to her.从那时起,每当她有问题,她会问我,我耐心向她解释.
①from then on固定短语,从那时起
②whenever无论何时,连词,引导时间状语从句
③be patient to do sth 有耐心做某事
高分句型二:
①At the same time,I②found my English improved,too.同时,我发现我的英语也提高了.
①at the same time固定短语,同时
②find sth done发现某事已经被做,表被动
解答 Dear Ann,
Nice to hear from you.As you know I enjoy helping others.I still remember I helped a girl with her English when we were in Junior Seven.Li Hua,one of my classmates,was not good at English,but I did well.【帮助的谁及她发生了什么事】So one day,I went to her and told her I could help.Her big smile made me feel good.From then on,whenever she had problems,she would ask me,and I was patient to explain them to her.【高分句型一】Little by little,her English improved with my help.At the same time,I found my English improved,too.【高分句型二】【如何帮助的李华】
Everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other.In fact,helping others is helping ourselves.【我的想法】
Yours,
Wang Fang
点评 此题为应用文写作.首先要仔细审题,严格按照要求去写作.其次要注意信的格式,并注意与汉语信的不同;再次行文中要语句通顺,注意上下句的衔接,用英语式的思维去组织每个句子,避免受汉语的影响.采用不同的句式,尽量避免重复.注意不要出现单词,语法和时态等的错误.这样的文章就是好文章.
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