Question

16．根据以下提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文．
一个健康的身体是每一个人工作和学习的根本保证，怎样才能保持健康的体魄呢？
要点：
1、健康对我们很重要．
2、注意饮食．吃健康食品，不吃垃圾食品
3、经常锻炼
4、养成良好的卫生习惯，早起早睡．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：Firstly，pay attention to your diet．Eat more vegetables and fruit．They are good for health首先，注意饮食，多吃蔬菜和水果，它们对健康有好处．pay attention to注意，to是介词，后面加名词或名词短语等；be good for对…有好处．
高分句型二：If you want to have a strong body，do it like that如果你想有一个强壮的身体，就这样做．这是由if引导的条件状语从句；want to do sth．想要做某事．

解答 Health is important to us．（开篇点题说明健康的重要性）How to keep healthy？Let me give you some advice．
Firstly，pay attention to your diet．Eat more vegetables and fruit．They are good for health．（高分句型一）You shouldn't eat too much meat．Don't eat junk food，such as ice cream and hamburgers．They do harm to us．
Secondly，doing exercise every day is necessary．It can help us keep away from getting fat．
Finally，you should have a good living habit．We should sleep for about 8 hours at night．You shouldn't work too hard．Go to bed early and get up early．（怎样才能保持健康的体魄）
If you want to have a strong body，do it like that．（高分句型二）（发出号召）

点评 （1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．