Question

7．我们从各大媒体了解到由于空气污染导致人类受害的各种现象．比如：中国的许多大城市出现"雾霾"；印度有上千人死于高温；世界各地出现各种肺病等等．对此情况，请你根据以下要点，以Protect the air为题，写一篇英语短文，呼吁大家减少空气污染．
1． The air has become really polluted around us．
2． There is heavy smog（雾霾）…
3． Thousands of people in India…
4． We can begin with small things…
参考词汇：
die（死）；high temperature（高温）；lung diseases（肺病）；plant（种植）；ride bikes（骑单车）；call to prevent（呼吁阻止）
要求：
①80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数；
②语法正确，文理通顺、流畅，并适当发挥；
③书写规范，卷面整洁
④文中不得使用你的真实姓名及校名
Protect the air
Air is as important as food．____________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Let's take actions now!

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
So it's important for us to keep air clean and fresh 因此，保持空气清新是很重要的．这是it is+形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型，对于…来说…是有用的．     
高分句型二
And there are all kinds of lung diseases around the world世界各地都有各种各样的肺病．这是there be句型，表示某地有某物．

解答 Protect the air
Air is as important as food．So it's important for us to keep air clean and fresh【高分句型一，注意it is+形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】．However，the air has become really polluted around us．The polluted air has caused many serious problems【要点一，空气污染已经引起许多问题】．There is heavy smog in many cities of China【要点二，关于雾霾】．Thousands of people in India died from high temperature．And there are all kinds of lung diseases around the world【高分句型二，there be句型的使用】．【要点三，空气污染的后果】
How to keep air clean and fresh？We can begin with small things，such as planting more trees，riding bikes instead of driving．We can also call people to prevent the air pollution．【要点四，应该采取的措施】
Let's take actions now!

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑
关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．