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2．近来，中小学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注．其中垃圾食品、电子游戏等是影响健康的重要因素，请以"Keep Healthy"为题谈谈你的看法．
要求：
1．列举中小学生面临的健康问题．
2．谈谈怎样才能保持健康．
3.80词左右，开头已给出，不计入词数．
4．语法正确，文理通顺、流畅，并适当发挥．
提示词：junk food，be bad for，computer games，suggestions，stay away from
Keep HealthyToday，some students have several health problems．      ．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇给材料作文．要求介绍中小学生面临的健康问题并谈谈怎样才能保持健康．主要用到一般现在时态．

①They always have too much homework to do．他们总是有太多的家庭作业要做；句子中too much意思是太多，修饰不可数名词，to do在这里作后置定语，修饰homework．

②If we can develop healthy habits，we will be healthier and happier．如果我们能养成健康的习惯，我们就会更健康，更快乐．句子考查if引导的条件状语从句，主句用一般将来时，从句用一般现在时．

解答 Keep Healthy
Today，some students have several health problems．（引出话题）Some don't have enough time to sleep．Some don't have a healthy diet and often eat junk food．Some are crazy with computer games or play with mobile phones too often．A lot of students are too busy to do sports．They always have too much homework to do（高分句型）．（中小学生面临的健康问题）What should we do to keep healthy Firstly，I think we need about eight hours'sleep every day．Secondly，we should learn to relax．We can do sports every day，such as running and playing ball games．Thirdly，we should eat more vegetables，fruits and less fast food or junk food．Also，we are supposed to pay more attention to our study and stay away from computer games or our smart phones．（如何保持健康）
If we can develop healthy habits，we will be healthier and happier．（高分句型）（发出倡议）

点评 此题为提纲作文，要仔细审题，抓住描述的重点，把所给信息条理清楚的表达出来，要求语句通顺，单词，语法，时态正确，书写规范，字数合乎要求，切忌出现中文式的英语，这样才能算是一篇好作文．