题目内容
【题目】书面表达（满分20分）
现在有许多新的购物方式，网上购物是其中的一种。越来越多的人熟悉和喜欢网购。但是网购有利有弊。请根据下面提供的信息用英语以Online shopping为题写一篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。
优点：
1．可以在任何时间购物。
2．只需要一台电脑和鼠标。
3．方便比较同类产品的价格，可以省钱。
4．无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品。
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缺点：
1．网上付款有时不安全。
2．看不到实物，也不能试穿衣服。
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注意：
1．不得在作文中出现你真实的学校名称和自己的姓名。
2．语句连贯，表达准确，词数80-100。
3．短文开头已给出，不计人总词数。
Online shopping
There are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.
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【答案】
Online shopping
There are many new ways of shopping, and online shopping is one of them.
Online shopping has several advantages, First you can shop at any time. Second, to shop on the Internet you only need a computer and a mouse. Third, you can compare the prices of the same product and save money. You can also receive it anywhere in the world at any time!
But shopping on the Internet also has some disadvantages. Paying over the Internet isn't always safe. You can't see the product or try the clothes on.
I think our life is changing because of online shopping. One day no one will go to the shops any more, because you'll be able to buy almost anything on the Internet.
【解析】
试题分析：本题要求以Online shopping为题写一篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。根据要求及要点提示，短文可以从“网购的优点”、“网购的缺点”、“自己的看法”三个方面进行写作。短文提示要点较多，要注意表达的条理性。短文用一般现在时态，写作时要注意语句连贯，表达准确。
写作亮点：短文从新购物方式着笔，引出“网购”。过渡自然。第二段讲述网购的优点、第三段讲述其缺点、最后谈论自己的看法。层次清楚，条理分明。第二段里用first, second, third等等罗列各要点，清楚明了；第三段用两个动名词短语作主语，语言简捷、精炼。最后一段用展望未来的方式表达自己的看法，方式新颖独特。
