Question

4．根据所给提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，可适当发挥，短文已给出的部分不计入总词数．注意：文中不得出现真实姓名和校名．

Twenty years ago Sandy and Kitty were in the same class．They studied together，sat on the same bench and became good friends．They had the same hobbies．Of course，they have some trouble．Sandy was very quiet，but Kitty was outgoing，so when Kitty told some stories，Sandy always didn't listen carefully．
Later they went to different colleges．They had not seen each other then．Last week they met on the treet!Sandy is a doctor now．She works in a famous hospital．Her husband is a doctor，too．They have a lovely daughter．She is so thin that Kitty can hardly get to know her．Kitty is a clerk in a company．She becomes thin，too．Her husband is a driver．Their son studies hard and often get good grades．They are very happy．They want to Ren Min Zoo next week．The two families will go together．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画作文．内容是根据图画说说Sandy和Kitty两个人的过去和现在．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
描述图画；二十年前：好朋友，同桌，爱好相间，经常一起，烦恼…
现在：职业，家庭，变化，愿望

常用到的重点短语：
become good friends成为好朋友
so…that 如此…以至于
study hard 努力学习
get good grades 取得好成绩
【高分句型】
1．They studied together，sat on the same bench and became good friends．
and连接的三个动词短语．
2．Sandy was very quiet，①but Kitty was outgoing，so ②when Kitty told some stories，Sandy always didn't listen carefully．
①but表示转折，不能与although连用．
②when引导的时间状语从句．

3．She is so thin that Kitty can hardly get to know her．
so…that如此…以至于，that引导的结果状语从句．

解答 Twenty years ago Sandy and Kitty were in the same class．They studied together，sat on the same bench and became good friends．【高分句型】They had the same hobbies．Of course，they have some differences．Sandy was very quiet，but Kitty was outgoing，so when Kitty told some stories，Sandy always didn't listen carefully．【高分句型】（二十年前）
Later they went to different colleges．They had not seen each other then．Last week they met on the street!Sandy is a doctor now．She works in a famous hospital．Her husband is a doctor，too．They have a lovely daughter．She is so thin that Kitty can hardly get to know her．【高分句型】Kitty is a clerk in a company．She becomes thin，too．Her husband is a driver．Their son studies hard and often get good grades．They are very happy．They want to Ren Min Zoo next week．The two families will go together．（现在）

点评 写作时要注意一些几点：
（1）应抓住文章中心，围绕主题，根据提示列出要写的信息要点．
（2）注意内容是否充实、积极和健康．
（3）注意文章的结构层次，要凸显文章的主题．
（4）要注意语言规范，表达准确，选材造句都尽量使用学过、见过的语言材料．