Question

【题目】为了满足广大学生对DIY的喜爱，你们学校成立了DIY俱乐部。假如你是Justin，想加入该俱乐部，请根据下表所提示的要点和内容写一份申请函，谈谈你想加入该俱乐部的理由。

要点	内容
培养独立意识	独立思考；自主选择；敢于尝试（或自拟内容）
调节学习生活	获得乐趣；丰富生活；体验成功（或自拟内容）
提升个人素养	直面困难；……（请考生自拟两点内容）

参考词汇：独立independence n. ；调节adjust vt.；素养quality n.

注意：1. 申请函中必须包含所给要点，具体内容可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；

2. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；

3. 申请函中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。

Dear Chairperson,

I would like to join the DIY Club. _____________

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I hope I can be a member of the DIY Club.

Yours Sincerely,

Justin

Answer 1

【答案】【参考范文】

Dear Chairperson,

I would like to join the DIY Club. For me, I like to do something by myself. Here are some reasons why I want to join your club.

First, making things by myself can cultivate my independent consciousness because I need to make things on my own. It’s important for teenagers to think independently and choose freely, and try things bravely.

Second, joining the club can adjust my study life. DIY has so much fun and it can enrich my life. What’s more, after I finish an object, I can experience success.

Third, DIY can improve personal qualities. It makes us face difficulties directly and be patient with questions.

I hope I can be a member of the DIY Club.

Yours Sincerely,

Justin

【解析】本文是一篇英文申请函。写作时要注意结构清楚，逻辑清晰，观点明确。内容包括以下三点：1. 培养独立意识：独立思考；自主选择；敢于尝试……2. 调节学习生活：获得乐趣；丰富生活；体验成功……3. 提升个人素养：直面困难；……写作时要用热情洋溢的语言把所列举的要点内容准确地表达出来，注意上下文要联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。谈想加入该俱乐部的理由时，可以使用first，second进行列举，使文章显得条理性更强。