Question

【题目】不同的人有不同的爱好，你的爱好是什么?请你以“My Hobby”为题，
写一篇不少于70词的英语短文。内容可适当发挥。
要求：句子通顺，语言流畅，标点符号运用正确。
My Hobby

Answer 1

【答案】My Hobby
My hobby is singing. Singing is fun and it makes me feel proud.
Singing can help me relax, and it can also help me improve my accent. Singing makes me happy when I'm sad. Singing can make me excited when I'm sleepy. I am always singing, because I believe singing can share each other's joy and sadness in our lives. Singing is just like the salt in my life-without it, my life will be tasteless.
I believe everyone has his or her own hobby. And a hobby can not only develop our minds but also add more fun to our lives.
【解析】这是一篇命题作文，以 My hobby为题写一篇关于自己爱好的文章，题给出的材料较为简略，动笔前应先认真阅读材料，围绕所给材料组织内容，确定主要短语，句式等问题。通过阅读材料可知这篇短文主要使用的人称就是第一人称，时态为一般现在时态，这方面需要注意的问题比较少。动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词。