Question

【题目】根据汉语提示及要求，用英语写一篇短文介绍你将来想从事的职业。

提示：1.想成为一名记者；

2.打算给报纸、杂志写文章；

3.高中毕业后想去纽约上大学；

4.想在一家电台工作并环游世界。

要求：1.条理清楚，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；

2.提示内容全部体现在文章中；

3.不少于60词。

Answer 1

【答案】When I grow up, I am going to be a reporter. I am going to write articles and send them to newspapers and magazines. I am going to practice writing every day. When I leave senior high school, I want to go to a university in New York. Maybe I can get a part-time job and make some money. I am going to make a living on my own. In the future, I am going to work for a TV station as a reporter. And I have a plan for traveling all over the world.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我将来想从事的职业。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为单数第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am going to…….，I want to……，Maybe I can……，And I have a plan for……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我长大想要成为一名记者，接下来介绍我打算如何做，最后计划周游世界。此处grow up, send sth to sb, practice doing sth, want to do sth, make a living , on one’s own, in the future, all over the world等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。