题目内容
【题目】书面表达
你的初中生活即将结束,结束也意味着成长。在你的成长过程中,一定有什么东西起到了重要的作用。请以“ makes me grow up”为题用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你的看法。
要求:1.语言表达准确,短文连贯通顺;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称;
3.80词左右。
makes me grow up
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【答案】Love makes me grow up
I am a 15-year-old teenager now. During the past days and nights, I have learned and got many things. Many things make me grow up, especially love.
There is no doubt that love is all around. My parents take care of me all the time and they give me all their love. My friends are always nice to me, too. When I am happy, they are also happy. When I am in trouble, they help me out. And when I face difficulties, they always stand behind me and support me. I want to say that nothing is more important than love from my parents and friends.
With their love, I grow up. And because of their love, I become stronger and stronger.
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以…makes me grow up为题,介绍一下在自己的成长过程中,对自己起到重要作用的东西。写作前,应仔细审题,先把题目补充完整,在学生们的成长过程中,有影响的事情是很多的,如爱、朋友、老师、家长等,可以根据自己的实际生活,选择其中一个,然后围绕所选主题,进行详细的阐述。这是一篇开放性的作文,题目中并没有规定必须写的内容,这给了学生们足够的发挥空间,学生们可以尽情发挥想象力,但注意一定要切合主题,论据要充分。写作时,应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的,不能逐词翻译,写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体考虑,写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主,穿插并列句和复合句,使叙述简洁、明了,也能调整文章节奏,提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使上下文意连贯。