Question

【题目】三年的初中生活即将结束，你一定对初中生活留下了很多美好的回忆。下周五你班要召开毕业班会，请根据下面的英文提示，并适当发挥，以“I remember ”为题，写一篇90词左右的短文，分享你校园生活中的一次活动或经历。

要点如下：1. What’s the event?

2. When and where did it happen?

3. How did you feel at that moment?

4. How has the event changed your life?

注意：1.短文需包含以上要点，并适当发挥。

2.短文中已给出的部分，不计入总词数。

3.短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等相关信息。

I remember

How time flies! My junior school life is coming to an end.

Answer 1

【答案】I remember

How time flies, my junior school life is coming to an end. I had a lot of memories during the three years’ study. What impressed me most is the school charity sale.

When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas. We prepared well for the activity. We made some postcards, bookmarks, and even some kites in our spare time.

Finally, the big day came. The charity sale was held on our playground. We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us. They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited. Everything went well. Our class got nearly 800 yuan in the end. Then we sent the money to Project Hope to help those poor children.

It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity. If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如come to an end，plan to do，a lot of，hold a charity sale，prepare for，in our spare time，hold on，at first，come to join us，give us some help，in the end，a lot，in need等。而复杂并列结构It was a wonderful and unforgettable experience and I’ve learned a lot from the activity./ We felt nervous at first, then our teachers came to join us.和When I was in Grade Eight, our school planned to hold a charity sale to help the children in poor areas./ They encouraged us and gave us some help, so we became happy and excited./ If everyone gives a helping hand to those in need, the world will be much better.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。