Question

【题目】书面表达（10分）

Tony是我的笔友，他来自澳大利亚，现居住上海。今年14岁。音乐和足球是他的最爱。他还喜欢中国食物和熊猫。他想在中国当一名记者。今天天气晴朗，他正在和朋友们在公园玩。

请根据以上的信息，写一篇以My pen pal 为题不少于60字左右的短文（关键词已给出）

Australia, Shanghai, music, soccer, Chinese food, pandas, reporter, sunny, playing, park

Answer 1

【答案】

Tony is my pen pal. He comes from Australia and he is living in Shanghai at present. He is fourteen years old. What he likes most are music and football. He also likes Chinese food and pandas. He wants to be a reporter in China. Today is a sunny day and now he is having a good time with his friends at the local park.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文所给的信息非常详细，主要介绍笔友托尼的年龄，国籍，爱好，及理想。根据提示可知最后用现在进行时描写公园里玩。

写作亮点：短文这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。一些高级的句式给文章增色不少，如：What he likes most are music and football。now he is having a good time with his friends at the local park.等。