Question

【题目】（题文）假如你是李哲,你邀请了来自美国的新同学托尼(Tony)到你家做客。现在请你根据提示向他简单介绍一下你的房间。提示词:soccer ball 足球

要求:

1. 语句通顺,语意连贯；

2. 完整地介绍图片中的内容；

3. 不少于30词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。

Hi, Tony! This is my room

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Answer 1

【答案】Hi, Tony! This is my room

As you can see, right in the middle is my bed and next to it is a small table where I can place things like books and food. My desk sits against the window and under the chair is a soccor ball, which is my favorite sports. I always put my bag casually on the ground.

【解析】

本文属于话题作文，向好朋友托尼介绍房间。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如as you can see, middle, next to, against, favorite, always, casually, on the ground等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。