Question

【题目】书面表达

学校将在下周举行英文演讲比赛，Jack的话题是 “对我影响最深的人”，请根据以下材料，帮他组织一篇100字左右英文演讲稿，介绍一下三位对他影响最深的人，并说说你的感想。

Persons	Job	Details
My mother	a teacher	1. 四十几岁; 2. 充满爱心（至少举一例说明）; 3. 决定死后捐献遗体。
Tan Dun	a composer	1. 出生于中国，湖南；2. 热爱天籁之音，用普通东西创作音乐; 3. 帮助建立东西方音乐之桥。
Spud Webb	an NBA player	1. 个头矮小，梦想进入 NBA; 2. 一直为梦想而奋斗; 3. 1985年成为NBA球员。

注意：

1.表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

2.词数100左右，短文首句已给出，不计入总词数。

3.表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。

The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. There are three persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother, Tan Dun and Spud Webb.

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Answer 1

【答案】The persons who have influenced me most

I am happy to give a speech here. There are three persons who have influenced me most. They are my mother, Tan Dun and Spud Webb.

My mother is a teacher. She is in her forties. She has a heart full of love. She often donates money to children in poor areas. She has decided to donate her body after she die.

Tan Dun is a famous composer, who was born in Hunan, China. He loves beautiful music. He

Spud Webb is an NBA player. When he was young, he dreamed to become a member of NBA. But he was refused because he was too short. Without losing heart, he kept on working hard. At last in 1985, he successfully became a member of NBA.

They are all my heroes. They are really worth learning from.

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍三位对我影响最深的人，并说说我的感想。

结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I am happy to……，My mother is……，She has……，When he was……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。