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5．根据中文大意和英文提示词语，写出意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于60词的短文．所给英文提示词语供选用．请不要写出你的校名和姓名．
还记得去年7月21日那场大雨吗？向阳派出所所长李方洪为救凤凰亭村村民，献出了自己宝贵的生命．请你以"Learn from him!"为题，发一篇微博．说说李所长，谈谈你的感受以及我们应该学习他什么．
提示词语：a police officer，the flood of July 21^st，villagers，safety，be deeply moved，brave．
It was last July 21^st．It rained so hard in Beijing that some villages were watered by the flood．At about 1：00 o'clock，Li Fanghong，the police officer of our district，went to see the villagers．When he saw rainwater coming into one of the houses，he organized them to leave to safety．However，while he was carrying an old man，he was killed by electricity．
I was deeply moved by his story．I think he is not only a good officer but also a brave hero of us．He did his best when he faced great danger．I should learn from him．I will think of others first and help them as much as possible when facing difficulties．．

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分析 重点短语：
1．be deeply moved 被深深感动
2．face great danger面对巨大的危险
3．learn from sb．向某人学习
高分句型：
【高分句型】1．It rained so hard in Beijing that some villages were watered by the flood．
北京的雨下得太大了，以至于有些村庄被洪水淹了．（so…that…"如此…以至于…"引导结果状语从句）
【高分句型】2．I think he is not only a good officer but also a brave hero of us．我认为他不仅是一个好干部也是我们的英雄．（not only …but also…不仅…而且…，连接并列的句子成分）

解答 It was last July 21^st．It rained so hard in Beijing that some villages were watered by the flood【高分句型】．At about 1：00 o'clock，Li Fanghong，the police officer of our district，went to see the villagers．When he saw rainwater coming into one of the houses，he organized them to leave for safety．However，while he was carrying an old man，he was killed by electricity．
    I was deeply moved by his story．I think he is not only a good officer but also a brave hero of us【高分句型】．He did his best when he faced great danger．I should learn from him．I will think of others first and help them as much as possible when facing difficulties．

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