Question

20．网络被广泛地应用于各个领域．人们通过网络学习、交流、工作、娱乐…请以"The Internet"为题，写一篇英语小短文，分享你对网络的看法，并向大家介绍你平时是怎样使用网络的．
要求：1．可以拓展，短文不少于90个词；
2．文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称．
The Internet
The Internet makes our life nicer，easier and more colorful．I often use the Internet to download useful information，chat with my friends or write e-mails．I also listen to music or play games on the Internet．Going shopping online is easy and interesting．But not everything on the Internet is good for us students．And we shouldn't spend too much time on the Internet．Playing computer games too much is bad forour health，especially forour eyes．So I'm sure the Internet is good for us if we use it properly．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：And we shouldn't spend too much time on the Internet我们不应该花太多时间上网．sb．spend some time （in）（doing） sth．某人花费时间做某事．
高分句型二：Playing computer games too much is bad for our health，especially for our eyes玩电脑游戏太多对我们的健康有害，尤其是对我们的眼睛．动名词短语Playing computer games充当主语，谓语用三单形式；be bad for对…有害处．

解答 The Internet makes our life nicer，easier and more colorful．（对网络的看法） I often use the Internet to download useful information，chat with my friends or write e-mails．I also listen to music or play games on the Internet．Going shopping online is easy and interesting．（怎样使用网络，分析优点）But not everything on the Internet is good for us students．And we shouldn't spend too much time on the Internet．（高分句型一）Playing computer games too much is bad for our health，especially for our eyes．（高分句型二）（分析缺点）So I'm sure the Internet is good for us if we use it properly．（得出结论）

点评 （1）句型多样化，不要I（We）…到底，使人觉得乏味．（2）适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句．（3）进一步描绘人或事物时，适当使用定语从句．（4）适当使用分词或分词短语，烘托谓语动词．（5）偶尔使用一下倒装句，增加新鲜感．