Question

1．假如你是韩雪同学，外教Mr．Smith想组织几名学生去一所国际学校进行一次助学和联谊活动．请你参考以下表格所提供的信息，以书信形式向Mr．Smith提出申请，陈述你所具备的能力并说明你打算如何开展这次活动．

Name	Abilities	Plans
Han Xue	1．Speak English very well； 2．Get on well with kids； 3．Dance and sing songs； 4．Play volleyball and tennis； 5．…	1．Organize all kinds of activities； 2．Introduce some Chinese cultures； 3．Help foreign kids to learn Chinese； 4．Make friends with foreign kids； 5．…

要求：1．参考表格中提供的信息，可适当发挥；
2．语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3．文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
4．词数：80词左右．（短文开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．）

Dear Mr．Smith，
I'm so excited to know that our school is organizing an activity to help the kids in an International School．I hope I can join in it．I think I have the abilities to help them．First I can speak Engliash very well and it is easy for me to communicate with kids．And I have a few hobbies，such as playing basketball and tennis．In addition，I can also dance and sing songs to make them happy．As you know，I'm patient and I believe they will like me，too．If Iam given the chance，I will help all kinds of activities．Also，I will introduce some Chinese culture to them．At the same time，I can help the foreign kids tolearn some Chinese．Certainly，I will be good friends with them and we can write to each other sometimes．
I really want to join you，please give me the chance，thank you very much!I'm looking forward to your reply!



Yours，
Han Xue．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 I think I have the abilities to help them．我想我有能力帮助他们． 这是一个宾语从句，I think是主句，后面的是宾语从句．
   高分句型二
 If I am given the chance，I will help all kinds of activities．如果我有机会，我会帮助各种活动．这是if引导的条件状语从句，主句是一般将来时，从句用的是一般现在时．．

解答 Dear Mr．Smith，
I'm so excited to know that our school is organizing an activity to help the kids in an International school．I hope I can join in it．【开头点明主题】I think I have the abilities to help them【高分句型一，注意宾语从句的使用】．First I can speak Engliash very well and it is easy for me  to  communicate with kids．And I have a few hobbies，such as playing basketball and tennis．In addition，I can also dance and sing songs to make them happy．As you know，I'm patient and I believe they will like me，too．If I am given the chance，I will help all kinds of activities【高分句型二，注意if引导的条件状语从句的使用】．Also，I will introduce some Chinese culture to them．At the same time，I can help the foreign  kids tolearn some Chinese．Certainly，I will be good friends with them and we can write to each other sometimes．【正文部分详细介绍自己】
I  really want to join you，please give me the chance，thank you very much!I am looking forward to your reply．【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．