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6.假如你是李华,现在的你和两年前相比,有很大变化.对于将来,你也有很多憧憬.
请根据下表写一篇短文.
Two years agoNowIn thirteen years
身份a primary school studenta Grade 8studenta doctor
外貌矮,短发高了些,头发和以前一样短高得多
个性害羞,朋友少更外向,朋友更多自信(confident) 友好
爱好弹钢琴每周打两次乒乓\
理想钢琴家长大后当医生\
注意:1.内容必须包括所给的全部要点,不用逐字翻译,可适当发挥.
2.表达清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯,书写规范.
3.正确使用一般过去时,一般现在时,比较级和一般将来时.
4.词数80个左右.
I'mLiHua.Twoyearsago,Iwasaprimaryschoolstudent.Iwasshortandhadshorthair.Iwasshyandhadfewfriends.Atthattime,IlikedplayingthepianoandIwantedtobeapianist.
NowI'mastudent in Grade8.I'mtaller,butmyhairisasshortasbefore.I'mmoreoutgoingandIhavemorefriends.Iplayping-pongtwiceeveryweekwithmyfriends.
Iwant tobeadoctor when I grow up.Iwillbemuchtaller.Iwillbeconfidentandfriendlytoeverybody.Ihopemydreamwillcometrue..

分析 高分句型一
 but my hair is as short as before.但是我的头发和以前一样短.    as …as,像…一样.
 高分句型二
  I want to a doctor when I grow up.我长大后想当一名医生.这是when引导的时间状语从句,当…时候.

解答 I'm Li Hua.Two years ago,I was a primary school student.I was short and had short hair.I was shy and had few friends.At that time,I liked playing the piano and I wanted to be a pianist.【要点一,两年前的情况】
Now I'm a student in Grade 8.I'm taller,but my hair is as short as before【高分句型一,注意固定词组的使用】.I'm more outgoing and I have more friends.I play ping-pong twice every week with my friends.【要点二,现在的情况】
I want to a doctor when I grow up【高分句型二,注意时间状语从句的使用】.I will be much taller.I will be confident and friendly to everybody.I hope my dream will come true.【要点三,将来的理想】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点,不可遗漏.需在平时积累相关的词汇,写作中注意语义通顺,符合逻辑关系.上下文之间可以适当使用连接词.如but,so,then等.

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