Question

9．以My pen pal（我的笔友）为题写一篇60个字左右的小短文

姓名	Lisa	年龄	13
籍贯	美国 纽约 （New York）	学校	No.3Middle School
外貌	金黄色长卷发，中等身材，有点胖
爱好	喜欢穿蓝色衣服，喜欢读书，下棋，游泳

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
She is always in blue because her favorite color is blue．她总是穿着蓝色的衣服，因为她最喜欢的颜色是蓝色．这是because引导的原因状语从句，因为…．
高分句型二
She is good at all her subjects．她擅长她所有的科目．be good at擅长．

解答 My pen pal
    I have a pen pal【开头点明主题】．She is Lisa．She comes from the USA．She studies in No.3 Middle School of New York．She is of medium height with long curly blondes hair．But she is a little fat．She wants to be thin．She is always in blue because her favorite color is blue【高分句型一，注意状语从句的使用】．She likes reading books，playing chess and swimming with her friends in her free time．She is good at all． her subjects【高分句型二，注意be good at的使用】．She likes helping her classmate．Both her classmates and teachers like her very much．She has many frineds【正文部分详细介绍朋友】．Do you want to be her pen pal？【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．