Question

【题目】某英文网站正举办主题为“Independence”的征文活动。假如你是张华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿。短文必须结合你的亲身经历，描述与独立这一优秀品质相关的一件事情，并谈谈它给你带来的影响及感受。

注意：①词数：80～100；

②短文开头仅供选择使用，不计入总词数；

③文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。

短文开头： I still remember．．

Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays, most children, who are the only child in the family, are given too much love by their parents. It is because that they are protected from hardship and difficulties, they become less independent.

Last year my parents went on businessand I was the only one at home.I had to try to cook my own meals, do the dishes and do the housework. I realized that I was often taken care of by my parents and lacked independence. During the days without my parents, I learned to take care of myself and the importance of independence.

We should know the fact that no parents can keep a good company with their children for the whole life. Thus, parents should encourage their children to do whatever they can, so as to develop their abilities of independence.

【解析】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in the family，too much，be protected from，on business，at home，have to do，try to cook my own meals，do the dishes，do the housework，take care of，keep a good company with，the whole life，so as to等。而It is because that they are protected from hardship and difficulties, they become less independent./ I realized that I was often taken care of by my parents and lacked independence./Thus, parents should encourage their children to do whatever they can, so as to develop their abilities of independence.等多种复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。