Question

11．最近你和你的同学就"中学生目前存在的问题"展开了讨论． 现在请你以此为话题，参照表内提供的信息，写一篇短文．

Problems	Causes	Advice
1．argue with parents	--------	have a talk with parents，understand each other
2．can't sleep well before exams	anxious about grades	--------
3．feel lonely	-------	--------

注意：
1．开头部分已写好，你只需接着写．
2．所写内容必须包括表格中的信息，和你所补全的信息．
3．词数：不少于80个．
Recently I've had a discussion with my classmates about our problems．Some of my classmates say they often argue with their parents．That is because their parents always ask them to study and they feel they have no free time to d o what they like．If they have a talk with their parents，the y can understand each other．
Some say they can't sleep well before exams because they are anxious about the grades．They should take a long walk to relax before going to bed．
Some also say they feel lonely because they don't know how to make friends．As the only kid in the family，students should ta ke part in some after-school activities and learn to communicate with others．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是总结中学生目前存在的问题的讨论结果．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．和父母吵架--原因--建议：与父母交流，彼此理解；
2．考试前睡不好--原因：担心成绩--建议
3．感觉孤独--原因--建议
常用到的重点短语：
argue with sb 与某人争吵
ask sb to do sth 让某人做某事
have a talk with sb 与某人交谈
be anxious about 担心
make friends  交朋友
take part in参加
communicate with sb 与某人交流
【高分句型】
1．That is①because their parents always ②ask them to study and they feel③they have no free time to do④what they like．
①because引导的从句作为表语，与is构成系表结构．
②ask sb to do sth 让某人做某事
③feel后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②do后是what引导的宾语从句．
2．Some say①they can't sleep well before exams ②because they are anxious about the grades．
①say后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②because引导的原因状语从句．be anxious about 担心
3．They should take a long walk①to relax②before going to bed
①动词不定式作为目的状语．
②before going to bed是before they go to bed的缩写．

解答 Recently I've had a discussion with my classmates about our problems．
Some of my classmates say they often argue with their parents．That is because their parents always ask them to study and they feel they have no free time to do what they like．【高分句型】If they have a talk with their parents，they can understand each other．（和父母吵架原因和建议）
 Some say they can't sleep well before exams because they are anxious about the grades．【高分句型】They should take a long walk to relax before going to bed．【高分句型】（考试前睡不好原因和建议）
  Some also say they feel lonely because they don't know how to make friends．As the only kid in the family，students should take part in some after-school activities and learn to communicate with others．（感觉孤独原因和建议）

点评 这是一篇给材料作文．本文给出了一些要点，并给出了作文的开头．我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥．根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题．写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
这篇短文多次使用主从复合句为文章增色不少．如That is because their parents always ask them to study and they feel they have no free time to do what they like．这是因为他们的父母总是要求他们学习，他们觉得他们没有空闲的时间做自己喜欢的．If they have a talk with their parents，they can understand each other如果他们与他们的父母交谈，他们可以互相了解．学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理．