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2．有一种节约叫光盘，有一种公益叫光盘！所谓光盘，就是吃光你盘子中的食物．拒绝浪费，珍惜粮食！针对这项行动，并根据以下提示，请你以No Wasting On Food为题写一篇短文，号召大家参与这项活动．
注意：1短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；
2短文标题与开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；
3词数：80左右．

Reasons	a waste of food，money，
	pollute the environment
	…
Suggestions	eat up all your food/clear your plate；
	leftovers（剩饭菜）…
	order less or smaller dishes
	…

No Wasting On Food
Recently，nearly 26restaurants in Nanjing have joined the"Clearing Your Plate"campaign（活动）against wasting food by offering smaller dishes．
I believe it is meaningful/necessary/importantfor us to take an active part in this activity．
It is a waste of food and money if we ordertoo much food．Meanwhile，the environment will be polluted by the wasted food．Also，eating too much is bad for our health．We should take actionto support the campaign．
First，we should eat up all the food in ourdishes and plates．Second，we may order less or smaller dishes in therestraurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later．
Ina word，I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是以No Wasting On Food为题写一篇短文，号召大家参与光盘行动这项活动．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．原因；浪费钱和食物，污染环境
2．建议；吃光食物，点少一点食物，打包剩菜
3．号召
常用到的重点短语：

take part in 参加
a waste of 浪费
take action to do sth 采取行动做某事
eat up 吃光
【高分句型】
1．I believe①②it is meaningful/necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity．
①think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．
2．It is ①a waste of food and money ②if we order too much food．
①a waste of 浪费
②if引导的条件状语从句．
3．①In a word，I think ②③it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．
①In a word总之
②think后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．
③it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语

解答 Recently，nearly 26 restaurants in Nanjing have joined the"Clearing Your Plate"campaign（活动） against wasting food by offering smaller dishes．
I believe it is meaningful/necessary/important for us to take an active part in this activity．【高分句型】
It is a waste of food and money if we order too much food．【高分句型】Meanwhile，the environment will be polluted by the wasted food．Also，eating too much is bad for our health．（原因；浪费钱和食物，污染环境，损害健康）We should take action to support the campaign．
First，we should eat up all the food in our dishes and plates．Second，we may order less or smaller dishes in the restraurant．Third，we can take the leftovers home and enjoy them later．（建议；吃光食物，点少一点食物，打包剩菜）
In a word，I think it is our duty to refuse the waste of food．【高分句型】（号召）

点评 对于此类文章的写作，学生在平时的练习、学习生活中要善于积累常用的表达多个好处的句型．英语的写作过程中切忌使用重复的表达，对于不会表达的意思要学会替换，同时注意用平时在课本中或是阅读中积累的单词句型来自如的表达自己的意思，这样文章才能写出新意，写出文采．