Question

3．假设你将代表你校2012届初三毕业生在毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿．
要点如下：

回顾	校园很美丽：每学期有丰富多彩的活动，例如，2010玉树地震过后，学校组织大家捐款，老师的教学生动有趣，三年来学到很多，进步很大
感谢	老师的培养，父母的支持，同学的帮助
祝愿	我希望…

注意事项：发言稿必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；
最后一个要点适当发挥1-2句；
词数90左右，发言稿的开头和结尾均已给出，不加入总词数．
Good afternoon，everyone!It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2012．
Our school is very beautiful．We have colourful activities every term．For example，our school made a
donation after the earthquake last year．Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．
We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years．We should thank our teachers for
their teaching，our parents for their support，our classmates for their help．I hope our school will be more
beautiful and everyone will have a good time here．
Thank you!

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是代表你校2012届初三毕业生在毕业典礼上发言，回顾一下三年的生活和祝愿．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．回顾；校园很美丽：每学期有丰富多彩的活动，例如，2010玉树地震过后，学校组织大家捐款，老师的教学生动有趣，三年来学到很多，进步很大 
2． 感谢；老师的培养，父母的支持，同学的帮助 
3． 祝愿
常用到的重点短语：
made a donation"捐赠"
try to do sth 尽力做某事
make+sth+adj 让某物怎么样
make progress 取得进步
have a good time 玩得开心
【高分句型】
1．Our teachers always①try to②make their lessons lively and interesting．
①try to do sth 尽力做某事
②make+sth+adj 让某物怎么样
2．We should thank our teachers for their teaching，our parents for their support，our classmates for their help．
thank sb for…因为…感谢某人，for是介词，后加名词代词或动名词．
3．I hope our school will be more beautiful and everyone will have a good time here
hope后是省略了引导词that的宾语从句．

解答 Good afternoon，everyone!It is a great honor for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2012．
Our school is very beautiful．We have colourful activities every term．For example，our school made a donation after the earthquake last year．Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting．【高分句型】We have learned a lot and made great progress during the last three years．（回顾）We should thank our teachers for their teaching，our parents for their support，our classmates for their help．（感谢）【高分句型】I hope our school will be more beautiful and everyone will have a good time here．（祝愿）【高分句型】

点评 这篇书面表达是根据要点来写的，所以主要把要点都表达出来，注意单词拼写正确，语法没有问题，适当使用恰当的句型．前面的回顾和感谢主要是结合要点进行阐述，最后的祝愿是学生根据自己的情况进行发挥，表现学生发散思维的能力．写作时注意不同时态的运用，例如回顾阶段，主要是过去时，表示感谢时主要用一般现在时，祝愿当然用一般将来时了．