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8．春天是个万物复苏，春暖花开的季节，各个学校都组织学生出去春游，九年级的学生是否也应该参与其中？有的学生认为九年级学生学业繁忙，不应该参加春游；而有的学生认为九年级学生更要注意劳逸结合，应该参加春游．结合以下表格信息，选择你的观点并阐述理由．

Pros	Cons
◆relax oneself ◆learn to look after oneself ◆be more connected to the teachers ◆…	◆a waste of time ◆feel tired after it ◆may have safety problems ◆…

注意：（1）选择其中一个观点，将标题补充完整；
（2）理由必须包括表中你所选择的观点的相应内容，可适当发挥；
（3）文中不得出现与你身份相关的信息；
（4）词数：80～100．短文开头已给出，不计入总词数．

We  take part in the school trip．（should/shouldn't）In the English class，we had a discussion on whether Grade Nine students should take part in the school trip．In my opinion．                          

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
1，Firstly，if we are given short breaks from schoolwork，we could relax ourselves，which is  good for our study．if 引导的条件状语从句，是复合句；此句还用了被动语态，be given；此句还用了which 引导的非限制定语从句．
2，Secondly，it is also a good chance for us to learn how to take care of ourselves．此句用了结构it is+形容词+for sb  to do 对某人来说干…是…的．

解答 We   should    take part in the school trip．
In the English class，we had a discussion on whether Grade Nine students should take part in the school trip． Some people think we should not take part in it．   But in my opinion，I think we should take part in the school trip．Firstly，if we are given short breaks from schoolwork，we could relax ourselves，which is  good for our study．＜高分句型＞And a long-time study will only make us tired and stressed．Secondly，it is also a good chance for us to learn how to take care of ourselves．＜高分句型＞Thirdly，we could be more connected to both our teachers and our classmates．We may understand each other better through this trip．Finally，the last school trip for us could be our everlasting memory．
  In a word，we should go and have fun!

点评 写图表半命题作文时，我们最好不要漏掉其中的要点，行文注意简化，不要拖沓冗长，适当写几个复合句比较用易得高分，但同时注意，适当用几个人连接词，使文章显得有层次感，同时，在作文完成的时候注意检查，修改，如果有条件的话最好能够先打个草稿，再抄到答题纸上，方能成为一篇好文章