Question

3．Write at least 60words on the topic"Tom's Christmas"
（以汤姆的圣诞节为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
汤姆在圣诞节发生了什么事？由此他产生了怎样的感想？请根据图片进行描述．
（注意：短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分．）

The following is for reference only．（以下表达仅供参考）
Strange，disappointed
At midnight
The next morning．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 He thinks that he must have Christmas gift from Santa Claus who will come in through the chimney  他认为他一定会收到从烟囱里进来的圣诞老人的圣诞礼物．首先这是一个宾语从句，He thinks 是主句，that he must have Christmas gift from Santa Claus who will come in through the chimney，同时在从句中又有一个定语从句 who will come in through the chimney，修饰先行词  Santa Claus．
高分句型二
He is so happy that he couldn't say a word．他是如此高兴，以至于一句话也说不出来．so…that，如此…以至于．

解答 Tom's Christmas
Tom is a middle-school student．It's December 24th．It's Christmas Eve【开头点明主题】．He thinks that he must have Christmas gift from Santa Claus who will come in through the chimney【高分句型一，注意从句的使用】．He looks for his gifts everywhere．But he finds nothing．He feels very disappointed and goes to sleep．The next morning he finds a big nice gift on his bed．He is so happy that he couldn't say a word【高分句型二，注意固定句型的使用】．He knows that it is his father that came in to his room and sent him the gift at midnight．【正文部分详细介绍图片内容】In fact love is from our family and our friends．【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．