Question

13．每个人都有各种各样的习惯，有些习惯能够助你成长，有些习惯会妨碍你进步．请结 合个人实际情况，以"My habits"为题，写一篇短文．
内容包括：
1．你有什么好习惯，请举例说明该习惯使你得到了哪些益处；
2．你有什么不良习惯，该习惯对你有什么影响，你将如何改进．
要求：
1.100词左右；
2．文中不得出现真实姓名及校名．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
 We often shared ideas about the books we read．我们经常分享关于我们读的书的想法，这是一个定语从句，先行词是ideas about the books，we read 是定语从句．  
 高分句型二
So it's hard for me to find my things．所以对于我来说找到我的东西很难．这是it is+形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型，对于…来说…是…．

解答 My habits
Habits play an important role in our life．Everybody has both good habits and bad ones．So do I．【开头点明主题】
I have many good habits．One of them is reading．It brings me fun，opens my mind and helps me make friends with others．Last year，I joined a reading club．We often shared ideas about the books we read【高分句型一，注意定语从句从句的使用】．Later we became good friends．This makes me happy．
As for bad habits，I don't like to tidy my room．So it's hard for me to find my things【高分句型二，注意it is+形容词+for sb．to do sth．句型的使用】．That brings me lots of trouble．I'm going to put my things in different boxes．【正文部分详细介绍自己的习惯】
Habits can help or trouble us．What will you do？【结尾紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．