Question

【题目】根据表格提供的信息，介绍自己的变化。

Things to do	When I was a child	Now
read	comic books and story books	novels and magazines
eat	junk food	healthy food
watch	cartoons on TV	thrillers at the theater
do…at school	play games with my classmates	play computer after class

I used to like reading comic books and story books when I was a child. But now I like reading novels.

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Answer 1

【答案】I used to like reading comic books and story books when I was a child. But now I like reading novels. When I was a child I used to like eating junk food because I thought they were delicious. But now I like eating healthy food because they are good for my health. I used to watch cartoons on TV when I was young, but now I like watching thrillers at the theater. I used to play games with my classmates at school, but now I like playing computer after class.

My favorite aunt is my aunt Karen. She is a very interesting person and a really good friend.

【解析】

试题这是一篇材料作文，结合所给写作信息，以“我的变化”为话题，把自己的“过去”与“现在”的不同有条理地表达出来。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般过去时态和一般现在时态为主，注意人称和一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中使用了but , like doing, junk food，healthy food, be good for，on TV，after class，and等词或固定短语，使上下文意连接紧密, 过渡自然。同时，本文最大亮点是叙事条理、表达清晰；还使用了时间状语从句、原因状语从句、宾语从句等丰富的句型，为文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。