Question

【题目】根据表格提供的信息，写一篇介绍Aunt Karen的短文。

Answer 1

【答案】Aunt Karen is 38 years old（in her late thirties）. She is slim, but not very tall. She has big, brown eyes and she wears glasses. Her hair, which she keeps at shoulder length, is dark and wavy. She usually dresses in comfortable clothes, and jeans is her favorite.

My aunt is a very kind and caring person. She is always there to listen to my problems and offer her advice and support. She is also very patient. These qualities make her an excellent social worker.

In her free time, Aunt Karen likes reading and painting. She is actually a very good painter and sometimes sells her paintings. Although she is not very good at sports, she enjoys horse-riding.

My aunt is a special person who has helped me on many occasions. She is someone I can trust and depend on.

【解析】

试题这是一篇话题作文，结合所给写作信息，以“Aunt Karen”为话题，对人物进行介绍。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态为主，注意人称和一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中使用了but, dress in comfortable clothes，listen to, in her free time，like doing，and, although，sometimes等词或固定搭配，使上下文意连接紧密, 过渡自然。同时，本文最大亮点是叙事条理、表达清晰；还使用了让步状语从句Although she is not very good at sports, she enjoys horse-riding，为文章增色不少，这是一篇不错的范文。