题目内容
1.为了改变我们的学习方式,这些年学校对我们的课堂进行了改革.请回忆这几年你的课堂所发生的变化,结合下列提示,从我们的学习形式、老师的教学方法及你自身发生的变化等方面,以"The Change"为题,写一篇80字左右的短文.提示:
过去:单独坐,与同学交流少,不敢在同学面前讲话,遇到问题不知道怎么办.老师一直讲,很无聊.
现在:坐成小组,经常与同学交流,能够在前面演讲,遇到问题找同学或老师寻求帮助.老师讲的少了,我们代替老师讲课,课堂非常有趣.
要求:
1、提示内容为参考内容,可增减,可替换,不可逐句翻译.
2、条理清晰,语句通顺,卷面清洁.
3、文中不可出现真实人名和校名.若确需使用人名或校名,人名一律用Li Ming,Liu Mei和Lin Hua代替,校名一律使用No.1Middle School、No.2 Middle School代替.
4、开头部分已给出,不计入总字数.
The Change
Our class has changed a lot these years.
分析 【高分句型一】
So now the students find studying is more interesting than before所以,现在学生发现学习比以前有趣了.
more interesting 比较级的应用;studying动名词作主语.
【高分句型二】
For myself,now I'm not afraid to speak in front of my classmates any more.对于我自己而言,现在我不再害怕在同学们面前讲话.
be afraid to do sth害怕做某事; in front of 在…前面;any more 不再.
解答 The change
Our class has changed a lot these years.(引起下文)
To improve the teaching quality of our school,the school authority made a lot of efforts for it.
For the teachers,they used to talk on the platform.Then they created more opportunities to interact with students,So now the students find studying is more interesting than before.【高分句型一】
For the students,instead of sitting alone,we now are sitting in group.That also gave us a lot of chances to interact with each other.
For myself,now I'm not afraid to speak in front of my classmates any more.【高分句型二】Sometimes,I even can teach something for the class as our teachers do.(前后对比变化)
The changes made us love studying and improve our grades.(效果)
点评 解答这种题目时,我们应该仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点. 要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写. 根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;语言表达要符合英语习惯. 在平常的学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,让文章更出彩.