Question

10．A．Say thanks to
B．My dream
要求：1．请从所给的A、B两个题目中任选一个作答，分值相同．
如选A题，请把题目补充完整再作答，例如，你可以写"Say thanks to my mom"，"Say thanks to my teacher"等．
2．注意紧扣主题，意思连贯，语言通顺，书写规范．
3．不得使用真实姓名和校名，如需使用名字，请用Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名统一用Guangming Middle School．
4．词数不少于80词．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I still remember the day①when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates②because I was shy and③afraid to be laughed at．我仍然记得我英语分数低的那天，我将自己藏起来因为我害羞害怕被嘲笑．
①when作为关系词的定语从句，修饰前面的the day．
②because引导的原因状语从句．
③be afraid to do sth 害怕做某事．
【高分句型二】
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future．她是一名老师，像春天一样，鼓励我带领我走向美好的未来．
who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰前面的teacher

解答 Say thanks to my teacher
I really want to express thanks to my English teacher，Miss Wang!（感谢谁）
She's so smart and fair and friendly．She's got big eyes and long dark hair．（形象）I enjoy her each lesson every day．
With her kindness，she gets my attention．Every day she's planting a seed，helping all of us．I still remember the day  when I had a low mark in English，I hid away from all my classmates because I was shy and afraid to be laughed at．【高分句型一】Miss Wang noticed that and spent her whole afternoon helping with my test questions and my worries．（如何帮助我的，为什么要感谢）
She's a teacher like spring who encourages and leads us to a bright future【高分句型二】．I'll write a poem for her to show all my thanks．I'll let everyone know she's great and I'm grateful to have her as my teacher．（感受和如何表示谢意）

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