Question

11．Daniel 是一名富有爱心，爱好广泛的学生．请你根据以下信息，以"My friend"为题写一篇短文介绍他．要求：语句通顺，要点齐全，不少于90词．

Personal information	14岁，八年级九班学生
Favourite season	喜欢冬天，在冬天堆雪人，和朋友互相打雪仗
Hobbies	对各种植物，动物和鸟类感兴趣，是观鸟协会的成员，想了解各种各样的鸟，每年去湿地观鸟，记录它们种类和数量的变化
Favourite animal	最喜欢大熊猫，但是大熊猫处于危险中，他认为…（列举两条保护措施）

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
His favorite season is winter，because he can make a snowman and have a snowball fight with his friends．
句中"because he can make a snowman and have a snowball fight with his friends"为原因状语从句．句中短语有"make a snowman 堆雪人"、"have a snowball fight  打雪仗"．这句话意为：他最喜欢冬天，因为他可以和朋友堆雪人、打雪仗．
高分句型二：
He think the government should make laws to protect them．
句中"the government should make laws to protect them"为宾语从句．"make laws"意为"制定法律"．这句话意为：他认为政府部门应该制定法律保护它们．

解答 My friend
Daniel is my friend．He is very nice．Let me introduce him to you．（开篇点题）
He is fourteen years old．And he is in Grade eight，Class nine．His favorite season is winter，because he can make a snowman and have a snowball fight with his friends．【高分句型一】He is interested in plants，animals and birds．He is a member of Birdwatching Association．He wants to know about all kinds of birds．He goes to the wetland every year to watch the birds and record the changes in their species and numbers．Of all the animals，he likes pandas best．However，they are in danger．He think the government should make laws to protect them．【高分句型二】What's more，we can learn how to take care of them．（介绍我的朋友）
This is my friend．What about yours？（总结）

点评 写作文时要注意平时语言的积累，避免出现语法错误，写作时注意条理清楚，语意通畅．