Question

13．假设某中学生英文报开展关于计算机与学生生活的征文活动，请你根据下表所提示的要点，以Computer in my life为题，用英语为该报写一篇短文，简述计算机在你生活中的用途，并就计算机对你生活的影响谈谈你的感受．

用途	学习	搜集资料；拓展阅读（或自拟内容）
	交流	传递信息；探讨问题（或自拟内容）
	生活	欣赏音乐；购买商品（或自拟内容）
	其他	（请考生自拟一点内容）
感受	计算机对你生活的影响（请考生自拟一点内容）

注意：
1．表达中必须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译．
2．词数90左右，开头已经写好，不计入总词数．
3．表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名．
Computer in my life
The computer has become an important part of my lifeUsually I use the computer to search for information and do some further reading．With the help of computer，I can get more knowledge easily in my free time．I not only communicate with my teachers and classmates by email，but also discuss questions with them online．What's more，I can enjoy the music online and shopping on the Internet makes my life much easier．Sometimes CD-ROMs help me learn English and make me relaxed．Moreover，I can take part in some kinds of activities online．
In a word，the computer is really of great help to me．It brings me a more meaningful and colourful life．．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要是根据图表内容，写一篇关于计算机和我们日常生活的关系的文章．首先观察图表内容，分层次写出计算机的几种用途，包括学习、交流、生活及其它方面；然后总结对于我们生活和学习的影响．写作时，连词的恰当使用在文章中起着衔接和过渡的作用，一些固定句式和搭配也要充分运用起来．不要简单翻译，要运用熟悉的句式来叙述．

解答 Computer in my life
        The computer has become an important part of my life． Usually I use the computer to search for information and do some further reading．With the help of computer，I can get more knowledge easily in my free time．I not only communicate with my teachers and classmates by email，but also discuss questions with them online．What's more，I can enjoy the music online and shopping on the Internet makes my life much easier．Sometimes CD-ROMs help me learn English and make me relaxed．Moreover，I can take part in some kinds of activities online．
        In a word，the computer is really of great help to me．It brings me a more meaningful and colourful life．

点评 小短文写出了图表的主要内容，首先从自身写起，在电脑帮助下能够学到更多知识，交流更加顺畅并且能够购物和听音乐．然后根据题目的提示，使写作内容得到了升华．最后总结电脑对于"我"的最大的帮助．语言流畅，内容充实，标点准确，句式多样化，是一篇好的习作．