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8．假设你叫李俊，你的美国朋友大卫（David）想认识更多的中国朋友．请通过电子邮年向他介绍你最好的朋友王明．王明情况见下表：

性别	男	年龄	14
外貌	方脸，大眼睛，短发，高个子
个性	幽默，守秘密，从不说他人坏话
爱好	喜欢动物，在家养了一些宠物
理想	当一名校长（headmaster），因为他喜欢与孩子们在一起
春节计划	寒假到美国旅游，参观美国白宫．

要求：1语言通顺，意思连续，书写规范；
2词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear David，
How are you？I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Ming to you．
                                                
You can email him at WM2000@163．com．I hope you two will become good friends soon．
Best wishes，
Li Jun．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
he likes winter best because he likes building snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends他最喜欢冬天，因为他喜欢堆雪人和朋友打雪仗．
because引导的原因状语从句．
【高分句型二】
So he wants to be a headmaster when he grows up他长大了想成为一名校长．
when引导的时间状语从句．

解答 Dear David，
How are you？I'm writing to introduce my best friend Wang Ming to you．
He is 14 years old．（性别年龄）He is tall with two big eyes．He is tall and has short hair．（外貌）
Wang Ming has a good sense of humor．He often tells us funny stories and makes us happy．He is also an honest boy and he can keep secrets for his friends．He never says a bad word about others．（个性）
He is crazy about DIY．It was my birthday last week．He made a birthday card for me．He is interested in learning about different kinds of pets and he keeps some pets at home．Of the four seasons，he likes winter best because he likes making snowmen and having snowball fights with his friends．【高分句型一】（爱好）
He likes to be with children．So he wants to be a headmaster when he grows up【高分句型二】．（梦想）
On winter vacation，I plan to travel to America to visit the  White House．（计划）
I hope you can make friends with him as soon as you can．Maybe he can show you around our country at the Spring Festival．
     Best wishes，
Li Jun．

点评 本题是提纲作文，给出假设中你的朋友的所有信息，让你介绍给另外一个朋友．要以书信的形式书写．作文内容基本已给出，但是不可逐条翻译．文章要连贯，有中心主旨，有重点．适当的需要把所给信息进行整合或重组，构成一篇完整连贯具有说服力的信．另外，要注意文章的人称，时态以及写信要注意到的写作方式