题目内容
【题目】书面表达
规划人生,成就未来。请以“My Dream”为题写一篇英语短文,描述你梦想的工作。
要求:1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息;
2. 词数:80—100。标题和短文开头已给出,不计入总词数。
【答案】Everyone has his dream. My dream is to be a doctor. When I was in Grade seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctor was very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I was getting better. Now I'm very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. I will study hard to get more knowledge in order to achieve my dream. I'll give my love to the patients as much as possible and help them out of danger.
To be a doctor is really great. I think my dream will come true one day.
【解析】
试题首先要认真阅读前面的提示, 认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称、时态和要求。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:学生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。文中be friendly to,cheer up, With the help of, study hard,in order to, as … as possible, come true等词组的恰当使用,使上下文意连接紧密;文中还多处使用了动词不定式作表语、时间状语从句、宾语从句和并列句等丰富的句型,使文章增色不少,值得学习。