Question

16．一方有难，八方支援．同学们，读完上面的报道后，你有何感想？你是否也想为灾区的人做点力所能及的事情？请你根据所给信息，写一篇短文．内容包括：
1、看到报道后你的感想？2、你会怎么样帮助灾区人们？
3、平时你在学校是怎样帮助同学的（至少2点）4、呼吁同学们要互相帮助．
要求：语句通顺合理，80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数．
I have just read a report about the disaster（灾难）which happened in Yunnan．
                                                       

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I hope they can go on their study我希望他们能继续学习．
hope后是省略了that的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
I often help the classmates who are weak in English我总是帮助那些英语差的学生．
who作为关系词的定语从句，修饰classmates．

解答 I have just read a report about the disaster（灾难） which happened in Yunnan．I am very moved that people all over China are giving a hand to the people there（感想）．I will give away all my pocket money to the children．I hope they can go on their study．【高分句型一】（会怎么样帮助灾区人们）At school，I often help the classmates who are weak in English．【高分句型二】Besides，when my classmate is ill，I hope to look after him/her．Helping others makes me happy．（平时你在学校是怎样帮助同学的）I think if we try our best to help the people in trouble，the world will become more beautiful．So，let's help each other．（呼吁同学们要互相帮助．）

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