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2．随着越来越多的农村劳动力进入城市，在农村随之产生了一个特殊的未成年人群体-留守儿童．近日，你校即将开展帮助留守儿童的志愿者活动．假如你是校报英语专版的编辑，请根据下面的表格提示写一封倡议书，向全班同学发出倡议，关注留守儿童．
提示：1．现状：农村有很多留守儿童．
2．提倡：1．与留守儿童交朋友；2．在生活方面关心照顾他们；3．在学习方面帮助他们．
要求：1．词数：80词左右（文章的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）；
2．根据所给信息可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
参考词汇：留守儿童left-behind children、
参考短语、句型：take care of，make friends with sb．，invite sb．to do sth．，help…with…
Dear classmates，
There are many left-behind children in the countryside in China．Their parents can't take good care of them．I think we should do something to help them．
First，we can make friends with them，for example，inviting them to our school or writing to them．Second，we are able to help them to have a better life by giving them daily products．Finally，we can help them with their lessons．
This activity is very meaningful； it is not only good for the left-behind children，but also helpful to us．
Yours，
Editor．

Answer 1

分析 本题作文为话题类作文，要求根据表格提示写一封倡议书，向全班同学发出倡议，关注留守儿童．写作要点已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各要点表达清楚．
高分句型：
①I think we should do something to help them．我认为我们应该做点什么来帮助他们．句子中think后面跟的是一个宾语从句，to引导的不定式短语作目的状语．
②it is not only good for the left-behind children，but also helpful to us．这不仅对留守儿童有好处，而且对我们也很有帮助．not only…but also 不仅…而且，引导两个并列的成分，be good for 对某某有好处．

解答 Dear classmates，
There are many left-behind children in the countryside in China．Their parents can't take good care of them．I think we should do something to help them（高分句型）．（引出话题）
First，we can make friends with them，for example，inviting them to our school or writing to them．Second，we are able to help them to have a better life by giving them daily products．Finally，we can help them with their lessons．（如何关注留守儿童）
This activity is very meaningful； it is not only good for the left-behind children，but also helpful to us（高分句型）．（这项活动的意义）
Yours，
Editor

点评 本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯．本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如Their parents can't take good care of them．I think we should do something to help them．表示顺序的副词First，Second，Finally，的应用更使得短文表述层次更清晰．总之，该文是一篇不错的短文．