题目内容
16．假设今天轮到你在英语课上作一个英语报告，主题是An accident．请根据下表信息写一份报告．| Time | 1月20日早上7：30 | |
| Weather conditions | 又冷又有风 | |
| Accident | 红灯亮时，一个骑着摩托车的男子试图穿过马路，撞上了一辆校车 | |
| Conditions of the victim | 男子伤了左腿，不能动弹 | |
| Action | 校车司机： | 匆忙下车 … |
| 警察： | 很快赶到，把男子送去医院 | |
| Feelings | 人人应该遵守规则 … | |
1 词数：不少于70词．
2 要点齐全，意思连贯，语句通顺．
3 …部分请发挥合理想象，自拟不少于1个要点．
参考词汇：摩托车motorbike；遵守规则：obey the rules
Dear everyone，
Today I'd like to tell you something about an accident．It happened at about 7：30 on the morning of January 20．A man rode his motorbike and tried to cross the stree t when the traffic lights were red．Then the motorbike crashed into a school bus．The man hurt his left leg and couldn't move．The school driver got off the bus and called 110 in a hurry．The policemen arrived quickly and sent the man to hospital．
I think safety is the most important．Everyone should obey the traffic rules．We can cross the street only when the traffic lights are green．When we cross the street，we must be very careful．
I think everyone should obey the rules．
Thanks for listening!
分析 【高分句型一】
A man rode his motorbike and tried to cross the street when the traffic lights were red红灯的时候一个男人骑摩托车试图过马路．
when引导的时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
I think safety is the most important我认为安全是最重要的．
think后是省略that的宾语从句．
解答 Dear everyone，
Today I'd like to tell you something about a traffic accident．It happened at about 7：30 on the morning of January 20．It's cold and windy．（时间天气）A man rode his motorbike and tried to cross the street when the traffic lights were red．【高分句型一】Then the motorbike crashed into a school bus．（事故）The man hurt his left leg and couldn't move．（伤者）The school driver got off the bus and called 110 in a hurry．The policemen arrived quickly and sent the man to hospital．（行动）
I think safety is the most important．【高分句型二】Everyone should obey the traffic rules．We can cross the street only when the traffic lights are green．When we cross the street，we must be very careful．（感受）
I think everyone should obey the rules．
Thanks for listening!
点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．
| A． | as usual | B． | again and again | C． | at the time | D． | since then |
| 写作要点 | 提示词 |
| 人类的不明智之举 | cut down，pour into，drive cars，… |
| 导致的问题 | become desert，water…dirty，air pollution，… |
| 你的建议 | plant，stop …from…，walk，reuse cloth bag… |
★包括上表要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范．
Saving the Earth
As time goes by，man is making the earth sick．
| 姓名 | Mike |
| 年龄 | 13 |
| 生日 | 10月25号 |
| 不喜欢的食物及原因 | 冰淇淋（不健康） |
| 最喜欢的科目及原因 | 美术（简单） |
| 爱好 | 画画和弹吉他等 |
②注意书写干净、整洁．
③文中不要出现真实姓名和班级．
Mike is my friend．He is 13．His birthday is on October 25th．He doesn't like ice-cream because it's not healthy．His favorite subject is art because it's easy．And he likes drawing and playing the guitar．I like to be friends with him．．