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4．近日华北多地遭遇重度雾霾天气，严重的空气污染给人们的生活带来了诸多不便．地球再一次向人们发出了警报，做为一名中学生，请以"Saving the Earth"为题，写一篇短文，呼吁大家爱护环境，保护地球．

写作要点	提示词
人类的不明智之举	cut down，pour into，drive cars，…
导致的问题	become desert，water…dirty，air pollution，…
你的建议	plant，stop …from…，walk，reuse cloth bag…

要求：★词数80个左右，开头已给出，不计入总数；
★包括上表要点，可适当发挥，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范．
Saving the Earth
As time goes by，man is making the earth sick．                       

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
More and more people drive cars越来越多的人开车．
比较级+and+比较级：越来越…
【高分句型二】
We'd better walk to work if it's possible如果可能我们最好走路上学．
if引导的条件状语从句．

解答 As time goes by，man is making the earth sick．peopie cut down too many trees and leave rubbish everywhere．
Factories pour waste water into rivers．More and more people drive cars．【高分句型一】（人类的不明智之举）This has caused some serious problems，such as，the fields become desert，the river is dirty，and the air is polluted．（导致的问题）what shall we do to save the earth？My suggestion is that we should plant more trees，put the rubbish into dustbins and stop factories from pouring wastes directly into the air or rivers．We'd better walk to work if it's possible【高分句型二】．And it's good to reuse cloth bag when shopping．In all，we have only one erath，We must try our best to protect it，and make it more beautiful．（建议）

点评 表达内容涉及社会热点问题，所给材料比较详细，提示词关键到位，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来．动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥．写作中要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题．同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．