Question

2．请根据以下提示发挥想象，写一篇80词左右的日记．注意要点完整，语法正确，上下文连贯，格式已经给出，请不要写出你的真实姓名和学校名称，谢谢！
内容包括：
（1）你和张莉是朋友、同桌，相处有好，你擅长英语，她擅长数学．
（2）昨天英语测试，她想抄袭，被你拒绝；想查字典，又被你阻止．她很生气，你也很上心．
（3）你决定下周找她好好谈谈你对这事的想法和观点，并希望今后你们能够互相帮助，共同进步．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
I hope we can help each other with English and maths and make progress together in the future我希望今后我们能够互相帮助，共同进步
hope后是省略that的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
As students，we should try our best to learn all our subjects well．作为学生，我们应该尽力学好课程．
try one's best to do sth 尽力做某事

解答 Zhang Li is my friend．She sits next to me．We get on well with each other．She is good at maths and I do well in English．（你和张莉是朋友、同桌，相处有好，你擅长英语，她擅长数学）
Yesterday we had an English exam．She couldn't spell any words correctly．She wanted to copy mine，but I refused her．After that，she wanted to look them up in her dictionary．I stopped her．She was very angry and argued with me．I felt so sad．（昨天英语测试，她想抄袭，被你拒绝；想查字典，又被你阻止．她很生气，你也很伤心）
I think about this thing all the time．She should study hard to learn English well．She shouldn't cheat herself．After all，honesty is the most important．Next week，I will find a chance to talk about it with her．I hope we can help each other with English and maths and make progress together in the future．【高分句型一】As students，we should try our best to learn all our subjects well．【高分句型二】（你决定下周找她好好谈谈你对这事的想法和观点，并希望今后你们能够互相帮助，共同进步．）

点评 提纲类作文的要点都给了出来，在写作的时候需要使用合适的连接词把这些要点连接成一个整体．同时注意使用高级词汇和句式让文章更有亮点．