Question

【题目】七、书面表达(共1题:满分20分)

写作要求:

1.仔细观察上面的两幅图片，然后用英语描述图片内容。

2.你赞同上述图片中的哪一种教育方式，为什么?

3.谈谈你的父母平时是怎样教育你的。

注意:1.词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数;

2.短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。

From the pictures above, we can see that

Answer 1

【答案】From the pictures above, we can see that different parents give their different opinions about the same thing.When parents see a cleaner in the street,some of them told their children not to do some cleaning like him.So they say to their children"If you don’t study hard,you will end up like him" .However,other parents say to their children,"If you study well,you will be able to make a better world for him".

I think the latter is better for children because the words can encourage children to work harder.My parents, care about my education more than anything else. They could do everything for me.They spend most of their spare time coaching their children in studies.It seems as if a better education is all that parents expect for children.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，描述图片内容，谈谈你父母平时是怎样教育你的。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：we can see that……，If you don’t…….，I think…….，They could…….，.It seems as if……，等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。