题目内容
【题目】假如你是心理医生Dr Smith, 你收到学生Mary的来信,她在信中说,自己很喜欢看电视,但父母担心影响她的学习,不让她看,她有时和父母吵,很烦恼,却不知道怎么办。请你给Mary回个信给出解决问题的办法。提示词:stop doing, make……sad, understand, be bad for, help……with, too long.
要求:1. 文稿须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。2. 条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,标点正确;3. 70个词左右(开头结尾已给不计入总词数)。
Dear Mary,
Thanks a lot for telling me your problem. ……
Best wishes!
Yours,
Dr Smith
【答案】Thanks a lot for telling me about your problem.
First, stop arguing with your parents. Arguing with them is not right. It can make your parents very sad. Remember: your parents always love you. Second, you should understand your parents, watching TV too much is really bad for your study. Third, you can tell your parents what you think. You could tell them watching TV can help you with your study. And you won't watch too long.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Dr Smith
【解析】这是提纲类作文,以一封信的形式,作者首先感谢对方的来信,接着提出了第一个建议:停止和父母吵架,并说明了原因,其次提出第二个建议:理解父母。最后提出了第三个建议:告诉父母你的想法。内容要点完整,应用词汇灵活准确,条理清楚,意思连贯,语句通顺,很好地表达出作者解决对方问题的方法,是一篇比较优秀的作文。